tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3971808675697780700.post8707741874193432274..comments2023-11-06T12:36:23.406-05:00Comments on Diary of a Children's Book Writer: 1,000 Word Writing ContestSheri Perl-Oshinshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08025716805041579831noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3971808675697780700.post-55960210427230508992008-02-15T22:02:00.000-05:002008-02-15T22:02:00.000-05:00Hey Struggling, thanks! And thanks for stopping by...Hey Struggling, thanks! And thanks for stopping by too. I have to go to Chris' site to see what Part II will entail. I don’t' have too many words left so I will have to be able to complete part II in as few words as I can. Yikes, me so few words! I shudder to think...Sheri Perl-Oshinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08025716805041579831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3971808675697780700.post-26422049978620092862008-02-13T11:55:00.000-05:002008-02-13T11:55:00.000-05:00Good beginning. I'm interested to see where it go...Good beginning. I'm interested to see where it goes next. I also feel bad for the protagonist, which is a good thing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3971808675697780700.post-2419853458611129722008-02-12T15:27:00.000-05:002008-02-12T15:27:00.000-05:00Thanks Sarah! I am not used to telling a story in ...Thanks Sarah! <BR/><BR/>I am not used to telling a story in such a limited amount of words. So we will see.Sheri Perl-Oshinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08025716805041579831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3971808675697780700.post-70526310066461464492008-02-12T15:03:00.000-05:002008-02-12T15:03:00.000-05:00I liked this, Sheri. You ground it in reality so w...I liked this, Sheri. You ground it in reality so well--we've all felt so powerless, especially as kids. <BR/><BR/>But then you introduced the creepy, old lady, which really made it take off. <BR/><BR/>Can't wait to see what happens next! :)Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3971808675697780700.post-91766871765859393262008-02-12T07:44:00.000-05:002008-02-12T07:44:00.000-05:00WOW! Thanks guys. To have both of you say that mak...WOW! Thanks guys. To have both of you say that makes my day! And it's only 7:45 am!Sheri Perl-Oshinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08025716805041579831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3971808675697780700.post-31587725707802837392008-02-12T05:26:00.000-05:002008-02-12T05:26:00.000-05:00I also think it's fantastic!!!I'm so happy you're ...I also think it's fantastic!!!<BR/>I'm so happy you're participating!!<BR/>:-)Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11794946908789120139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3971808675697780700.post-54266988895663746032008-02-11T22:26:00.000-05:002008-02-11T22:26:00.000-05:00Wow! I haven't read any other entries, but I think...Wow! I haven't read any other entries, but I think this is fantastic. I'm sorry the MC broke the flute. That sucks! Good job :)PJ Hooverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02602205868934777662noreply@blogger.com